A communication
Gap,
Some
Sentimental
Case of
Broken telephone.
Maybe that
Mars,
Venus
Syndrome?
Yet,
Here
It sits…
Stirred
Shaken
Wiped thoroughly
With
Hand sanitizer.
Preferring
Salt
To
Sugar
Most moments
Darling,
Cigarettes after sex
Needing
Lips
Tasting
Like,
Healing minerals
I suck
From Your
Mouth.
Electrolytes
Pointless to resist,
How
I try
Oh, how I…
F.
Oh, to feel that just once. You do have a way of expressing things. I love it.
I’m delighted that you enjoyed it! Your continued support keeps me writing. Thank you John 🙂
You are welcome.
This has left me with a big smile on my face. I love it. Very well done. 🙂
Many thanks for your sweet words! This makes me so happy <3
You are very welcome! 😊
Evocative and sensual piece, adore it. Thank you for sharing it.
Very flattered by this lovely comment! You have a way of saying exactly what I want to hear… Thank you, I really appreciate it 🙂
I think you capture that moment perfectly. In my mind’s eye I can see the room lit only by a lamp on the nightstand. The smoke swirls in the glow of the lamp and the cigarette lies smoldering in a ashtray as the shadows on the wall move towards each other again.
This is the vision your writing gave me.
Responding to your comment for the second time. Had some issues with the site and one of the things I lost was my response. Thank you for putting a smile on my face during a stressful day. I love what you wrote! I’m glad my writing gave you such a beautiful vision 🙂
You really know how to capture a scene, beautifully sensual 😀
Thank you for this wonderful comment! I’m happy you liked it 🙂